There's part of it where I can here you saying 2 different things so it was a little hard to understand but other than that it was really good. Hopedale sounded like a very boring town if everyone had to be "morally sound", no wonder it didn't last.
I couldn't post this comment on the voicethread so i'm doing it here. Good job explaining your person. He seemed very dedicated to his work. Liked the pictures too. -Jeremy
Can't comment on your voicethread, so I'll comment here- Ballou seems a bit off with his attempts to create moral reform. His efforsts are commendable, while not entirly effective.
Good job Sammi! You included lots of quotes and facts, which is always good! I didn't really comprehend what exactly his reform was, but I got it eventually. I guess it's good that it made me think. Overall, awesome job!
Couldn't comment on the voicethread, so blog post it is. Nice job with the quotes and facts. Ballou seems like he hopped around reform/religious groups until he decided none were right for him, so he created his own church.
Good job Sammi! It seems like your guy was really fickle about it but also really independent and true to himself, he followed only what he believed in, something that a true Transcendentalist would do
Couldn't post on voice thread, so I'm doing it here. I like how you included quotes about his ideas. Like your reformer, mine was not accepted by the church and created a community for his followers.
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ReplyDeleteThere's part of it where I can here you saying 2 different things so it was a little hard to understand but other than that it was really good. Hopedale sounded like a very boring town if everyone had to be "morally sound", no wonder it didn't last.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't post this comment on the voicethread so i'm doing it here. Good job explaining your person. He seemed very dedicated to his work. Liked the pictures too. -Jeremy
ReplyDeleteCan't comment on your voicethread, so I'll comment here- Ballou seems a bit off with his attempts to create moral reform. His efforsts are commendable, while not entirly effective.
ReplyDeleteGood job Sammi! You included lots of quotes and facts, which is always good! I didn't really comprehend what exactly his reform was, but I got it eventually. I guess it's good that it made me think. Overall, awesome job!
ReplyDeleteCouldn't comment on the voicethread, so blog post it is. Nice job with the quotes and facts. Ballou seems like he hopped around reform/religious groups until he decided none were right for him, so he created his own church.
ReplyDeleteGood job Sammi! It seems like your guy was really fickle about it but also really independent and true to himself, he followed only what he believed in, something that a true Transcendentalist would do
ReplyDeleteCouldn't post on voice thread, so I'm doing it here. I like how you included quotes about his ideas. Like your reformer, mine was not accepted by the church and created a community for his followers.
ReplyDeletei really liked youre reformer's ideas he seemed to be very determined
ReplyDeleteGood job on this! Seems like your guy had some really important ideas about everything that was going on at the time.
ReplyDeleteHey Sammi, great job! i really like your person ...well as a person but also as a refomer. he seems very dedicated to his work.
ReplyDeletesorry you guys voicethread has issues on my computer so I can't even edit the settings. Or see any of your voicethreads
ReplyDeletesammi Great work, you did wicked quoting and overall laying out your voice thread. yours was wicked good in comparison to my guy
ReplyDeleteHey Sammi great job! you used really good quotes and pictures i like the way everything flowed together well. He clearly had an impact
ReplyDeleteNice job. Lots of quotes. another religous guy... so so many.
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